Settings.
The story Trials of Death starts out in a huge, old fashioned vampire cave called Vampire Mountain. Really creative right? Anyway, in the middle of a deep dark forest with trees heavy enough to block out the sun, there is a huge mountain. Inside this mountain there’s this glowing moss that lights most of the cavern which you have to admit is pretty cool. There are many caverns and tunnels and different bigger rooms. I can describe only a few:
The Halls: Here the vampire princes along with every other vampire in the mountain gather for trials and general discussion. It is a large room that can fit hundreds. There are four thrones I’m pretty sure for each of the princes.
The Hall of Finale Voyage: This is like the graveyard of our world. In the middle of this room there is a river with a heavy current that eventually flows out of the mountain. Dead vampires used to the shoved into this river, where they’re bodies were supposed to flow out of the mountain and leave the bodies for the forest to devour. Now though the fire pit somewhere in the room is used instead because bodies kept getting stuck. This room is always wet and soggy because of the water and it guarded by people called the Guardians of Blood.
One last Hall I’m Going to Describe That I Don’t Remember the Name of: Yeah I can’t remember the names of all the halls, but this one is really important so I have to include it anyways. In this Hall there aren’t many things. Most vampires have never heard of it. It is a huge cavern lit somewhat by glowing moss. There are spiders everywhere. They are of a species that the author didn’t describe, but are a bright yellow color. There are dried cobwebs along with all the webs currently in use. If you were to accidentally let a spark from a torch hit a web the whole cavern would go up in flames, like paper.
There are also many random tunnels in Vampire mountain, most of which are not put into much detail. They swerve through the whole place, making it very, VERY easy to get lost in. Just imagine having to live there.
Should I continue writing?
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Sam- it's like reading poetry!!
ReplyDeletebeautiful- you are definately ready to move beyond now- begin to analyze (you already sorta do this with your side comments)but probably don't realize it. I encourage you to explore the why? and the contributing factor...
You are very thorough when you decribed the setting. Everything you said is like we are on the mountain! I like the way you wrote in the last paragraph that they have lots of swerves. And you wrote just imagine living there.
ReplyDeleteSAMMY!!!! I love the way you write...everything! This place that you discibed sounds really spooky. I liked the way you said "where they’re bodies were supposed to flow out of the mountain and leave the bodies for the forest to devour".
ReplyDelete